This is the rough cut of our opening sequence of our film Psychosis. We have put two of our scenes together without the titles involved to get an idea of where we need to improve.
We spoke with our teacher who gave us feedback on where we were lacking where we needed to be with the editing as well as filming. We originally had a scene where there was a calendar which said 'Therapy Today' which we took out as it was rather shaky and didn't fit what we were expecting. Another point was that we had a shot with a hand going into a different angled shot of the hand which we were told was too much as well was shaky. This is why we removed the one and kept the other shot of the girl's hand in bed. We had to take out other areas if the hallway scene as we were told they were too dark and unclear. Other than that we were pleased with the outcome of the rough cut and took on board and went with some of our feedback.
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