This is our rough cut which we have created to give us a general direction of where our 2 minute sequence should be heading. We chose a group to specifically show our rough cut so that they can give us successes and criticisms.
The group said that when watching, the story line makes sense and we have a wide variety of shots. However, we needed to swap the first two shots so that the phone torch makes more sense as it is turned on in the first scene, not in the second. Our audience also said that the boyfriend of kelly didnt seem very bothered by her phonecall, however this is expained in the rest of the narrative as the boyfriend actually exchanges her, which is why he is not that shocked that she has been taken. We still have alot of the story board to follow which creates the question of whether we will fit it all in within the 2 minutes. Furthermore, we also got feedback on our actors saying the main characters reaction to being locked in the boot was very realistic. We will use these points to now direct the rest of our opening sequence and make sure that the narrative makes sense in the first two minutes.
0 Comments
Leave a Reply. |
Paige, Anna, Fiona, Natalie
|